Academic writing is a core skill for every researcher, yet many HDR students find it challenging. Clear and effective writing is essential, not just for sharing your findings, but for determining how your work is understood and valued by others.
David Lindsay, a scientist and Emeritus Professor at UWA, deals with these challenges in his popular book, Scientific Writing: Thinking in Words. David visited Curtin Library earlier this year and gave a wonderful presentation to HDR students with many practical tips on writing journal articles drawn from his book.
In this post, I’ll outline some of the insights and examples David shared in his presentation. You’ll find advice on everything from the importance of creating a compelling story and writing a good title, to how to structure your writing to keep your reader engaged. These pointers will help you write with greater clarity, confidence, and impact.
You are not truly a researcher unless you write like one. Effective communication, especially through writing, is a core part of being a professional researcher.
Unfortunately, most researchers receive little formal instruction in writing, and thus struggle with it. David recommends five fundamental ‘nuts and bolts’ which will help you enjoy the writing process.
Understand what makes good writing:
Engage your readers:
Structure your writing well:
Prioritise good style:
Don’t forget your reader:
Create a compelling story
One of David’s key messages was that writing a good research paper involves converting your research or ideas into a compelling story. Some things to bear in mind include:
Construct your title carefully
Your title needs to convince readers they’ll learn something useful if they read on. Include discovery, action, and consequence.
Compare these title examples
A scientific title example:
Writing your introduction
The introduction is the ‘powerhouse’ of your article. It tells your readers what they can expect, gives them guidelines to interpret your work, and sets up your data as part of an evidence-based story. A good introduction should:
Writing up results
Start by presenting the findings that directly address your hypothesis, as this is what readers expect first. Next, include any other results that are particularly interesting or noteworthy. Omit any information that does not add value or relevance. Ensure that every result you present leads to a clear conclusion about its meaning or possible implications.
Writing up the discussion
Take a similar approach to prioritising your discussion points. Structure your paragraphs by starting each paragraph with a clear topic sentence that signals what the paragraph will cover. Use the body to present your reasoning and interpretation of results. Always end with a concluding sentence that explains the significance of your findings so your reader will understand the impact of your work.
Clear, precise writing helps your readers understand your research and its significance. Here are three practical techniques you can use to improve the clarity of your academic writing:
Use prepositions to avoid ambiguity
Ambiguous phrases can confuse your reader. Add prepositions, such as ‘of’, ‘as’, ‘on’, ‘at’ or ‘by’ to make your meaning clear.
Ambiguous:
“blood amino acid uptake”
Clear:
“uptake of amino acid from blood”
“uptake of amino acid by blood”
Tip: When you write a phrase that could be interpreted in more than one way, add a preposition to specify exactly what you mean.
Use verbs instead of nouns
Verbs make your writing more direct and dynamic. Avoid turning actions into nouns (a process called “nominalisation”).
Before:
When blood temperature increased, the patient’s respiratory response deteriorated.
After:
Increases in blood temperature resulted in a deterioration of the patient’s respiratory response.
Tip: Look for sentences where you’ve used a noun to describe an action, and try rewriting them with a verb instead.
Use signpost words to guide your reader
Signpost words help your reader follow your argument and understand how your ideas connect.
Examples of signpost words or phrases:
Tip: Try adding signpost words to the beginning of sentences or paragraphs to show how your ideas relate to each other.
Small changes in how you structure your sentences can make a big difference in how easily your readers understand your work. Practice the techniques in your next draft and notice the improvement in clarity and flow.
The main thing to remember is that you are writing to make it easy for your reader. If you apply the strategies and techniques suggested above, your readers will be happy, your writing will be successful and you will enjoy it as well!
If you found David’s tips and examples useful, as those of us who were in the audience did, then I recommend taking a look at his book, Scientific writing: Thinking in words Second edition.;Victoria : CSIRO Publishing; 2020. It’s available in the Curtin Library as an ebook.
In the book you’ll find many more techniques and examples to strengthen your writing and share your ideas with confidence.
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